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« on: November 14, 2005, 03:57:40 AM »
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« Reply #1 on: November 14, 2005, 04:01:39 AM »
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« Reply #2 on: November 14, 2005, 04:03:35 AM »
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« Reply #3 on: November 14, 2005, 04:05:29 AM »
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« Reply #4 on: November 14, 2005, 04:07:22 AM »
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« Reply #5 on: November 15, 2005, 12:47:24 AM »
Rehana jee
Sardar JahaN gir saheb ka afsana share karney ka shukria
kuch log apney jazbaat ka izhaar nahiN kar paatey aur mehroomiat ka shikaar rehtey haiN apni is kamzori ki woh mukhtalif taujeehat dhoondh laitey haiN magar tanhai un ka muqadar ho jati hai.
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« Reply #6 on: November 15, 2005, 09:39:37 AM »
Quote from: Zmufti
Rehana jee
Sardar JahaN gir saheb ka afsana share karney ka shukria
kuch log apney jazbaat ka izhaar nahiN kar paatey aur mehroomiat ka shikaar rehtey haiN apni is kamzori ki woh mukhtalif taujeehat dhoondh laitey haiN magar tanhai un ka muqadar ho jati hai.
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Zarqa Ji!

  Aap ka tajziya mairay khyaalaat kay aine motabiq hey ,baaz o,qaat
insaan apnay jazbaat ka barwaqt azhaar nah kar paanay par saaree umar kay liay aik kurab mein mobtalaa rahtaa hey magar in sub cheezon
par insaan ka ikhtyaar bhi to nahien ............mairi aik nazm bhi taqreeban isi qisam kay jazbaat ki akkass hey ,shaid aap ko yaad ho..."Haar jieat" :-) chalo yahaan lagaa hi daitee hoon .Baharhaal aap ka apni ra,ay kay azhaar ka buhut buhut shukriya.
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« Reply #7 on: November 15, 2005, 01:51:19 PM »
Rehana jee
aap ki nazm to yaad thee magar unwan bhool chuki thii
aap ka tajzia bilkul durust hai aur aapki nazm dobara parh kar acha laga
shukria
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« Reply #8 on: November 15, 2005, 07:31:25 PM »
Aadab,
Sardar Jahangir sahib ka afsana "UjaRay dyaar" aaj pehlii baar parha he, bohat passand aaya. agar ho sakey to Sardar sahib ka koii aur afsana bhe share farmain. yeh afsana share karney ka bohat bohat shukrea.

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« Reply #9 on: November 15, 2005, 07:35:29 PM »
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Rehana jee
Sardar JahaN gir saheb ka afsana share karney ka shukria
kuch log apney jazbaat ka izhaar nahiN kar paatey aur mehroomiat ka shikaar rehtey haiN apni is kamzori ki woh mukhtalif taujeehat dhoondh laitey haiN magar tanhai un ka muqadar ho jati hai.
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Zarqa Ji!

  Aap ka tajziya mairay khyaalaat kay aine motabiq hey ,baaz o,qaat
insaan apnay jazbaat ka barwaqt azhaar nah kar paanay par saaree umar kay liay aik kurab mein mobtalaa rahtaa hey magar in sub cheezon
par insaan ka ikhtyaar bhi to nahien ............mairi aik nazm bhi taqreeban isi qisam kay jazbaat ki akkass hey ,shaid aap ko yaad ho..."Haar jieat" :-) chalo yahaan lagaa hi daitee hoon .Baharhaal aap ka apni ra,ay kay azhaar ka buhut buhut shukriya.


Aadab,
Rehana behan, Sardar sahib ke itney khobsorat afsaney ke mutabiqat sey aap ne jo apni zaati nazam chaspan kii hey os ne afsaney ka lutaf dobaala kar deya. bohat bohat shukria. daad qabool farmaien.

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« Reply #10 on: November 16, 2005, 12:43:03 AM »
wah Rehana jii,

aaj Sardar Jahangir sahib ka yeh afsana parh kar dil khush ho geya,
waaqaii dil main uttar jaane walii tehreer he aour andaz-e biayaan....
keya kahoon Really heart touching.. :yinandyang:

agar possible ho tou Sardar Jahangir sahib tak mere daad pohancha dien. :thumbleft:

aap kii nazam bhii bohat hee khobsorat he, daad qabppl farmaien. :thumbup:

Sardar sahib ka afsana aor aap kii nazam daikh kar mujhay bhi Amjad
Islam Amjad ke chand ashaar yaad aagyee, pesh hain.


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« Reply #11 on: November 16, 2005, 02:40:30 PM »
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Aadab,
Sardar Jahangir sahib ka afsana "UjaRay dyaar" aaj pehlii baar parha he, bohat passand aaya. agar ho sakey to Sardar sahib ka koii aur afsana bhe share farmain. yeh afsana share karney ka bohat bohat shukrea.



Gulnar ji!

  Afsana aap ko bhi pasand aayaa ,khushi hu,ee.InshAllah jald hi un kay aur afsaanay bhi paish karnay ki koshish karon gee. :-)
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« Reply #12 on: November 16, 2005, 02:48:05 PM »
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wah Rehana jii,

aaj Sardar Jahangir sahib ka yeh afsana parh kar dil khush ho geya,
waaqaii dil main uttar jaane walii tehreer he aour andaz-e biayaan....
keya kahoon Really heart touching.. :yinandyang:

agar possible ho tou Sardar Jahangir sahib tak mere daad pohancha dien. :thumbleft:

aap kii nazam bhii bohat hee khobsorat he, daad qabppl farmaien. :thumbup:

Sardar sahib ka afsana aor aap kii nazam daikh kar mujhay bhi Amjad
Islam Amjad ke chand ashaar yaad aagyee, pesh hain.




Ghazala Ji!

           Afsana aur nazm pasand farmanay kay liay mamnoon hoon ,aap ki daad inshAllah Sardar Sahib tak zaroor pohnchaa dee ja,ay gee,jald hi un kay aur bhi buhut achhay afsanay share karnay ki koshish karon gee.
 Amjad Islam Amjad ki nazm kay kyaa kahnay haien bay had pasand aa,i ,share farmanay kay liay mamnoon hoon.aap ka buhut shukriya.
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« Reply #13 on: November 16, 2005, 06:12:43 PM »
Rehana Sahebah!

    kyaa afsana share kiya hey is ko paRh kar to maira bhi "Dil ro rahaa hey" :cry: buhut hi pur asar tahreer hey ,agar ho sakay to Sardar Sahib ko mubarak baad day dijiay gaa ,aur agar in ki aur tahreeraien bhi share kar sakien to khushi hogee.

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« Reply #14 on: November 17, 2005, 08:25:09 AM »
aadab,
Sardar Jahangir saheb ka yeh khubsourat afsana paish farmanye ka shukria. afsana bohat hee passand aaya. aik dil main ghar kar laynee waalii tehreer bohat muddat baa'd parhee. bohat bohat shukria.

aap kee nazam bhii bohat acchii lagii, chaspan karne ka shukria.