moHtaram Ismail Ajaz Aadab-o-tasleemaat!
Ummeed hai keh aap khaeriyat se hooN ge. Urduduniya ke mahanah t^araHee mushae'rah ke liye aap kee Ghazal dekhee. meree daanist meN aap ke kalam meN zeyaadah dilkash a'nSar aap kee sheereen-e-bayaanee aor shaoq angez tarakeeb haiN. kaha jata hai keh Ghulam Hamdani MuSHafee ke ba'd kisee shaae'ir ke yahaN woh sheereenee naheeN miltee jo Hasrat ke yahaN miltee hai. un ke yahaN tarakeeb meN shustagee, shaaei'stagee, aor lat^eef faarsiyat miltee hai. aor yahee khubee Hasrat ke kalam ko ishtiyaaq angez bana detee hai. mujhe aap ke kalam meN taGhazzul ka dilrubaa zaai'qah meHsoos hota hai. zabaan sadah aor be saakhtah hai. takalluf aor saakhtagee kee a'da maojudagee ne kalam ko dilkash bana diya hai. meree jaanib se is khubSurat Ghazal par dilee daad qubool keejiye.
chand aek miSre wazan meN naheeN aasake. mumkinah SurateeN pesh-e-khidmat haiN.
waadah toRte haiN aur mukarte jaate haiN
kuchh aise lowg haiN dil se utarte jaate haiN
Waah!
"Woh wa'dah toRte haiN aor mukarte jate haiN
"Woh wa'dah toR ke har dam mukarte jate haiN"
bohot ummeedeN rakkhte haiN jo lowgoN se sadaa
woh apne aap ko maayoos karte jaate haiN
Waah!
"jo dusrooN se ummeedeN laga ke rakhte haiN"
kyuN apnee zindagee se hum naheeN haiN mutma'in?
jabhee tow TooTte haiN aur bikhrte jaate haiN
Waah!
"ham apnee zindagee se kiyooN naheeN haiN mut^ma'in"
dikhaatee hai humeN aa'eenah jab jab zindagee
tow apne aks meN har dam nikharte jaate haiN
Waah!
"hameeN dikhatee jab zindaganee Aai'enah"
humaaree nazroN se woh bach ke jaasakte naheeN
jo sab ke kaan aate jaate bharte jaate haiN
Waah!
"hamaree naz^rooN se bach kar woh ja naheeN sakte
jo kaan shehr meN logooN ke bharte jate haiN"
haiN daanishmand woh jo ayeb apne DhooND kar
Khud apnee shaKhSiyat bankar saNwarte jaate haiN
is she'er ko dekh leejiye ga.
ko'ee kaih de Zaraa jaakar mire maHboob se
"tire baGhair yeh din bhee guzarte jaate haiN"
Waah!
lekin upar ka miSra' wazan meN naheeN asakaa. dekh leejiye ga.
kabhee tanhaa'ee meN jab yaad aatee hai "Khayaal"
tow aaNsoo aaNkhoN meN aakar Thaiherte jaate haiN
"kheyaal jab kabhee tanhaaee meN woh yaad haee"
Wassalam
Muzaffar
moHtaram janaab Muzaffar SaaHeb
salaamtee ho aap par
Allah aap ke ilm meN Khair o barkat aataa farmaaey ,beHad shukriah aap kaa maiN ne aap kee iSaalaah shudah muHabbaot o inaayat ko apnee Ghazal ke Husn o dilkashee kaa HiSSah banaakar ek baar phir urduduniyaa ke chaahne waaloN kee nigaah e karam ke HuSool kee tamannaa kee hai
Allah aap ko sadaa khush rakhe
mamnoon
Ismail ajaz Khayaal